Ruang
Ruang
Aku merasai kekosonganmu,
Menanti yang tak tiba,
Mengejar yang tak tercapai,
Seperti ada yang cacat pada diriku,
Yang menolak segala tuah
Ruang
Aku sabar demi sabar,
aku akur demi akur,
Menerima nasibku bak kesunyian
si tuli,
Yang patah semangatnya,
Yang gersang jiwanya, tanpa hujan rahmat
Ruang
Engkau bagai sahabat karibku,
Yang tidak ku pinta,
Hadirmu menghantui hayatku
tanpa penghujung,
Engkau mengajar tanpa belas,
Engkau mengajar melepasi makna
Ruang
Cukup sudah setiamu,
Tak ingin ku hidup,
bak suria tanpa bahang,
bak bulan tanpa malam,
bak wujud tanpa sayang.
Stingray
8 November 2005
Aku merasai kekosonganmu,
Menanti yang tak tiba,
Mengejar yang tak tercapai,
Seperti ada yang cacat pada diriku,
Yang menolak segala tuah
Ruang
Aku sabar demi sabar,
aku akur demi akur,
Menerima nasibku bak kesunyian
si tuli,
Yang patah semangatnya,
Yang gersang jiwanya, tanpa hujan rahmat
Ruang
Engkau bagai sahabat karibku,
Yang tidak ku pinta,
Hadirmu menghantui hayatku
tanpa penghujung,
Engkau mengajar tanpa belas,
Engkau mengajar melepasi makna
Ruang
Cukup sudah setiamu,
Tak ingin ku hidup,
bak suria tanpa bahang,
bak bulan tanpa malam,
bak wujud tanpa sayang.
Stingray
8 November 2005
posted by Stingrayz | 8:41 AM
15 Comments:
*sniff* i'm back gimme a ring
Rizal:
Wokay.
Pseudo:
Are you suggesting that I should be a lyricist? ;)
Ray, you have finally done it! You have impressed and awed the heck out of me!
Wow...
Hehehe I see the poetry bug is catching on!! ;)
This is good stuff, bro. Definitely publishable. Let's do a joint anthology! :D
Salam,
ZR
err, just a response to the prev comment. i am in no way related to electricity ;) altho, i do think i am somewhat electrifying, boleh ke? LOL
Kenapa "Ruang" sounds lonely yet so inviting ye?
Xena:
Thanks. I was beginning to think the day would never come. ;)
LMD:
Thanks!
ZR:
Yeah, probably caught the big from you. :)
Devil Bunny:
Not a song maaa. Puisi je. And what the hell is Mamula Moon? ;)
Thinktankgal:
You could not be more wrong. My BM at SPM was a C6. ;) But it was more the influence of loneliness than pining for Siti, actually. :)
Nenn:
Tak kerja TNB takpe. And if you're electrifying, even better. A whole bunch of men on this blog, who need to get electrocuted. ;)
Ruang should only sound inviting, for those looking to fill up their own ruang. ;)
Mamula Moon, my dear, is a Hawaiian tune by Mendelssohn which sounds uncannily similar to our national anthem. (Have forwarded u the article).
Whether it was a mere coincidence or musical plagiarism, well... ;)
Rain:
Thanks, Datin P. :)
But I always thought that the national anthem came from Tunku Abdul Rahman plagiarising the song "Terang Bulan". Is it not?
All these moon-related songs,..makes me feel like a wolf,...awwoooooooooo,....;)
i think that is very beautiful :)
is this a song or pantun or poem?
whateva it is, cheer up ok!
in dire need of a "filler" I see..
ylanda:
Thanks. :) And welcome to the blog!
Sooz:
It can be anything you want it to be.
Cheer up? If I get any more cheerful than this, they would have to declare a holiday tomorrow. ;)
Lita:
Not to fill my time. To fill my life. :)
alamak, kalah bekas pemantun daerah camni. feels like going back and scour the books ;)
Voice:
In the phrase made famous by the show "Pi Mai Tang Tu": "Kalau roboh kota Melaka, kat mana Hang Tuah nak duduk?" ;)
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